Update, November 23, 2007: I have taken “The Delivery” offline for the second and final time. It has absolutely, irrevocably become intertwined with the novel I’m almost finished writing for NaNoWriMo this year, “The Secret to Escape.” Jack and Pete will never be the same. I couldn’t help but include them and their story (which dropped you right in the middle of their job and left you right after) in the new piece.* I may post excerpts from the story in the future, I’m really not sure. My hope is that one day you’ll read “The Delivery” again in it’s final form after pulling it off the shelf at your favorite bookstore. (And paying for it, of course. They don’t like it when you just wander off with the books.)

*Don’t worry, I’m not including any of the word count from “The Delivery” in my word count for NaNo, and it wasn’t my intention from the beginning to utilize it until I realized that it ran a perfect tangent with what I was writing, and I had always wanted to see it become something bigger.